微技能-对话描写
对话描写
对话是记叙文中刻画人物性格、推动故事情节发展、增加故事生活性的重要表现手法。恰当、有效的对话描写能为文章增光添彩。
Ⅰ. 对话的不同形式及标点使用规则
1. 对话提示词在前
He said, “Life here is like a cafeteria. You can get anything you want as long as you are willing and able to pay the price for it.”
对话提示词后用逗号，引用部分结束用句号，位于引号内。
2. 对话提示词在后
“I will leave the message on the headmaster’s desk,” she said.
对话提示词后用句号，引用部分结束用逗号，位于引号内。
3. 对话提示词在中间
“China is a great country,” said many foreigners. “We love China very much.”
对话提示词前的引用语是完整的话，后面用逗号，位于引号内；对话提示词后用句
号；对话提示词后另起一句话时，首字母大写，句尾用句号，位于引号内。
“Yesterday,” said Mr. White/Mr. White said, “we had a wonderful time at the beach.”
对话提示词前的引用语是半句话，后面用逗号，位于引号内；对话提示词后用逗号；后半句开头一般不大写，句尾用句号，位于引号内。
Ⅱ. 提升对话描写的生动性
1. 对话提示词+语气
“We’re so pleased to meet you at last,” he said in a respectful tone.
2. 对话提示词+嗓音
“Can we speak privately?” she said in a low/soft/quiet voice.
3. 对话提示词+介词短语/副词
“How could you do that?” said Jack in surprise.
“That is fantastic news!” he said happily.
4. 对话提示词+动作/状语
The lights return. “Yeah, no more candles!” My father yells, pulling me away from my fantasy.
“I just want that one,” the little girl said, pointing to the pink toy.