【续写描写】提分表达:各种情绪描写
高考英语读后续写中的情绪描写是评分标准中的一个重要组成部分，它要求考生在续写故事时能够准确、生动地表达人物的情感和心理状态。以下是高考英语读后续写情绪描写的几个特点：
1. 准确性
情绪描写的准确性是指考生在续写时能够根据原文的情境和人物特点，合理推断并表达人物的情绪变化。这要求考生不仅要理解原文中的情绪基调，还要在续写中保持情绪的连贯性和一致性。
2. 生动性
情绪描写的生动性体现在考生能够通过具体的语言和修辞手法，如比喻、拟人等，将抽象的情绪具体化、形象化，使读者能够直观地感受到人物的情感波动。
3. 细节性
情绪描写的细节性要求考生在续写中注重人物情感的细微变化，通过人物的动作、表情、语言等细节来展现情绪的层次和深度。例如，通过描写人物的眼神、手势、语气等，来传达其内心的喜怒哀乐。
4. 逻辑性
情绪描写的逻辑性强调情绪变化的合理性和逻辑性。考生在续写时，需要确保人物的情绪变化符合故事发展的逻辑，避免出现情绪表达的突兀或不合理。
5. 创新性
虽然读后续写要求考生在一定程度上保持与原文的一致性，但在情绪描写上也鼓励考生发挥创意，通过新颖的角度和表达方式来增强故事的吸引力和感染力。
6. 语言的丰富性
情绪描写的语言丰富性意味着考生需要运用多样的词汇和句型结构来表达情绪，避免重复和单一。高级词汇和复杂句型的恰当使用可以提升情绪描写的质量和效果。
7. 情感的真实性
情感的真实性是指情绪描写需要贴近真实生活，反映人物在特定情境下的自然反应。考生在续写时，应尽量让情绪描写符合人物的性格和故事背景，避免过度夸张或不合情理的情绪表达。
综上所述，高考英语读后续写中的情绪描写是一个综合性的技巧，它要求考生在准确理解原文的基础上，运用丰富的语言资源和创意思维，生动、合理地展现人物的情感世界。通过这样的训练，考生不仅能够提升写作能力，还能够加深对文学作品的理解和鉴赏。
下面我们一起来学习情绪类的表达
情绪类
a wave of...=a feeling/sense of+ 情绪名词
flooded over sb=swept over sb 一阵...的情绪涌上心头。
Sb felt sb was floating in an ocean of +情绪名词
某人感到自己漂浮在……的海洋中
表示“害怕”
害怕的:(形) (人)afraid=scared=frightened=terrified=fearful=alarmed
(名)fear,terror, fright, panic
be full of horror=with fear
恐慌地:panicked, be in panic
恐惧地in terror
全身颤抖tremble from head to toe
恐惧蔓延某人全身fear creeps over sb.
脸色变得苍白face turns pale
I felt so frightened that my face turned pale and my palms were sweating. 我如此害怕以至于脸色变得苍白,手心出汗。
I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 我吓呆了,一动不敢动。
表示“开心”
高兴的(形)happy=pleased=pleasant=delighted=
glad=cheerful=joyful=overjoyed
(名)happiness=joy=delight
激动的:excited=thrilled; with joy/excitement
精神高涨的in high/cheerful spirits
让某人开心的是to one's delight
面带微笑wear a shining smile
心情好be in good mood=be in high spirits
使某人振作、高兴起来lift up one's head
振作精神keep up one's spirits
喜爱be keen on
欢欣鼓舞dance/jump for joy
欣喜若狂be wild with delight/joy
一个鼓舞人心的表情an encouraging expression
过一个愉快的假日have a pleasant holiday
几乎无法掩饰他的兴奋的心情:can hardly conceal his excitement
为成功而欣喜:be excited with joy at the success
感到鼓舞的:feel inspired/encouraged
1. Her eyes twinkled with excitement. 她的眼睛里闪烁着兴奋的光芒。
2. I was so excited that my eyes danced with joy and sweetness.我如此的兴奋以至于眼睛里跳动
着开心与甜蜜。
表示“感动”
感动感激的:(形)(人)moved=touched,
be grateful to sb for sth, appreciate(v.)
感激 (名) gratitude,appreciation
一股暖流涌上心头a warm current rises in one's heart
泪如泉涌tears well up in one's eyes
感动到流泪be moved to tears
被深深地感动be touched/moved profoundly
极为感动:be overwhelmingly moved
感到温暖feel warn
表示“愤怒”
生气愤怒的:(形)angry/annoyed/irritated/mad
(名)anger=rage,fury
狂怒的furious
眼中燃着怒火eyes burning
脸气得通红flush with anger
气得直跺脚stamp one's feet in anger
怒视某人glare at sb.
引起某人的不快arouse one's displeasure
不断地抱怨complain constantly
对某人勃然大怒get mad at sb.
对某人生气get irritated at sb.
对……表示不满express/voice a complaint about
充满怨恨的表情a resentful look
怒气冲冲地跑出房间:
run out of the room in a burst of anger
1.His face turned red with anger. 他气得满脸通红。
表示“难过”
悲伤失望的,痛苦的:(形)sad=unhappy=upset=heartbroken
=brokenhearted=sorrowful,
be in bad mood=be in low spirits, in sorrow
(名)sadness, sorrow
disappointed, discouraged, frustrated, depressed, desperate, hopeless (n.)sorrow=grief
心情不好in low spirit
泪流满面tears course down one's cheeks
强烈的失落感a strong sense of loss
怀着沉重的心情with a heavy heart
陷入绝望fall into despair
减轻某人的痛苦/烦恼ease one's pain/trouble
悲痛欲绝cry one's heart out
情绪低落be down in spirits
表示“害怕”
害怕的:(形) (人)afraid=scared=frightened=terrified=
fearful=alarmed
(名)fear,terror, fright, panic
be full of horror=with fear
恐慌地:panicked, be in panic
恐惧地in terror
全身颤抖tremble from head to toe
恐惧蔓延某人全身fear creeps over sb.
脸色变得苍白face turns pale
I felt so frightened that my face turned pale and my palms were sweating. 我如此害怕以至于脸色变得苍白,手心出汗。
I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. 我吓呆了,一动不敢动。
表示“困惑”
迷茫,不知所措at a loss
头脑一片空白mind goes blank
疑惑不解的puzzled/confused
对……皱眉frown at
挠头scratch one's head
表示“感动”
感动感激的:(形)(人)moved=touched,
be grateful to sb for sth, appreciate(v.)
感激 (名) gratitude,appreciation
一股暖流涌上心头a warm current rises in one's heart
泪如泉涌tears well up in one's eyes
感动到流泪be moved to tears
被深深地感动be touched/moved profoundly 极为感动:be overwhelmingly moved
感到温暖feel warn
表示“惊讶”
震惊的,惊愕的(形) astonished/surprised/amazed / shocked
(名)astonishment,surprise,amazement,shock
张大嘴with one's mouth wide open
惊呆了be numb with shock
惊讶地in astonishment
让某人惊讶的是to one's amazement
She stared at him, frozen with astonishment. 她惊呆了,直瞪着他。
表示“尴尬”
尴尬的:(人)embarrassed, (物)awkward, be in a dilemma
困惑的:puzzled=confused
尴尬得脸发红flush with embarrassment
低下头lower one's head
表示“骄傲”
骄傲的,自大的proud/self-important
傲慢的arrogant
趾高气扬hold one's head high
以……为自豪take pride in=be proud of
表示“紧张”
焦虑的,紧张的:(形)nervous, worried,tense, anxious, stressed; be concerned about=be worried about=be anxious about 紧张,不安 (名)anxiety, stress,nervousness 不安的restless
踱来踱去pace up and down
坐立不安get ants in one's pants
心跳很快heart beats wildly
表示“宽慰后悔羞愧等”
宽慰镇静的:relaxed, relieved, calmly, be in relief, feel a sense of relief
后悔内疚的:(形)regretted=ashamed=guilty
后悔,内疚 (名)regret, guilt
1.He had a relieved smile on his serious face. 他严肃的脸上露出如释重负的笑容。
2.To his relief, There's nothing wrong with his body. 如释重负
Seeing what was happening, they sighed in relief.
She felt so guilty that she could feel the blood rushing to her face.
她如此羞愧,以至于感觉血液
往脸上涌。
3.He was physically and mentally exhausted. 疲惫
4.The loneliness and grief comes in waves. 孤独