读后续写：十大情绪描写学霸进阶版
读读后续写 十大情绪描写
----通过心理、表情、动作表达人物情绪
人物情绪描写之一：开心/兴奋
平庸版：He was happy/excited.
进阶版:
1.Her face lit up with pleasure. 她的脸容光焕发。
2.Her heart was pounding wildly with excitement. 她的心兴奋得怦怦跳。
3.He rose to his feet in excitement. 他激动地站了起来。
4.My heart was as sweet as honey. 我的心像蜜一样甜。
5.His lips curved in smile when he saw us. 当他看到我们，咧开嘴开心地笑了。
6.His eyes twinkled with joy/happiness when he saw the news.
当他看到新闻，他的眼里闪耀着快乐。
7.I was in good mood at the moment, just like the white cloud in the blue sky.
我此刻心情舒畅，就像蓝天白云那样自在。
人物情绪描写之二：伤心/失望
平庸版：He was sad/disappointed.
进阶版：
sob(sobbed) v.呜咽，啜泣 weep(wept) v.小声/无声流泪
upset/frustrated adj.沮丧的 burst(burst) into tears/burst out crying 放声大哭
hold(held) back tears 抑制住泪水 do sth. in tears 含泪做某事
lower one’s head in sadness 悲伤地低下头
1.Her eyes were wet with tears. 她眼含泪水。
2.Hearing what I said, he sighed with disappointment. 他失望地叹了口气。
3.He stood silently, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他静静地站着，眼泪流下他的脸颊。
4.These days he was in low spirits. 这些日子他情绪低迷。
5.My heart seemed to be torn. 我的心都要碎了。
6.When he hugged/embraced me with his arms open wide, I felt a lump in my throat.
当他张开双臂拥抱我时，我觉得自己喉头哽咽。
人物情绪描写之三：紧张/害怕
平庸版：He was nervous/scared.
进阶版：
1.Standing in the classroom, I became increasingly nervous and could feel my heart beating
wildly. 站在教室里，我越来越紧张，我能听见自己心跳加速的声音。
2.Her face turned pale, feeling like sitting on pins and needles.
她的脸刷白，感觉如坐针毡。
3.Before the competition, his palms were sweating and knees were soft.
比赛前，他手心出汗，膝盖发软。
4.Looking at the audience in front of me, I couldn’t help trembling with panic.
看到我面前的观众，我忍不住吓得发抖。
5.The old man fled away with great panic. 那个老人恐惧地逃跑了。
6.At the sight of the fierce wolf, I froze with terror, too scared to move.
看到恶狼，我被吓呆了，一动不动。
7.As the day of the ball(舞会) drew near, Tom seemed uneasy and anxious.
随着舞会那天临近，Tom看起来很不自在和焦虑。
人物情绪描写之四：尴尬/羞愧
平庸版： He was embarrassed/ashamed.
进阶版：
1.He dropped/lowered his head in shame. 他羞愧地低下了头。
2.She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning. 她感到羞愧难当，脸上滚烫。
3.(倒装句so…that…)So ashamed was she that she could feel the blood rush to her face.
她感到羞愧极了，血液涌上脸颊。
4.He bit his lips, not knowing where to rest his hands. 他咬着嘴唇，手无处安放。
5.I wanted the floor to swallow me up. 我想找个地缝钻进去。
人物情绪描写之五：愤怒
平庸版： He was angry.
进阶版：
lose one’s temper发脾气 clench one’s fists/teeth 拽紧拳头/咬紧牙齿
raise one’s voice 提高嗓音
1.His voice trembled with anger/rage(愤怒). 他气得声音发抖。
2.Her face turned red with anger. 她气得满脸通红。
3.He glared at me with burning eyes. 他盯着我，眼里充满怒火。
人物情绪描写之六：绝望
平庸版：He felt hopeless/desperate.
进阶版： in despair 绝望地
1.He felt left out and was getting hopeless/desperate.他感觉被遗弃了，感到绝望。
2.On hearing the bad news, he was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into
hopelessness. 听到这个坏消息，他突然被投入黑暗世界，陷入绝望。
人物情绪描写之七：感谢
平庸版：I thanked my father.
进阶版：
be grateful/thankful to sb. for sth. 因某事对某人很感激
express/convey one’s gratitude/appreciation 表达某人的感激之情
1.I ran over to my father, reached out my hands and hugged/embraced him tightly/firmly.
我跑向父亲，伸出手，紧紧抱住他。
2.With tears in his eyes, he kept conveying his gratitude， “Thank you so much!”
他眼中满是感激的泪水，不停地说：“非常感谢！”
人物情绪描写之八：鼓励
平庸版： He felt encouraged.
进阶版：
1.Taking a deep breath, I managed to calm myself down and walked up to the platform
confidently. 深吸一口气，我成功地让自己镇定，然后自信地走上了讲台。
2.I walked over to him and patted him on the shoulder, encouraging: “Come on!”
我走向他，拍拍他的肩膀，鼓励道：“加油！”
人物情绪描写之九：震惊
平庸版： He was surprised.
进阶版：
shocked adj./ astonished adj.
one’s eyes blinked with surprise 吃惊地眨眼
be speechless with shock 惊讶得说不出话
1.His eyes widened with surprise/shock when he heard the news.
听到这个消息后，他惊讶地睁大了眼睛。
2.It’s hard to believe. He didn’t accept the job that he was long for.
真难以置信，他竟然没有接受那份期待已久的工作。
3.He was looking at his report card, eyes wide open. 他睁大眼睛看着自己的成绩单。
4.He was shocked beyond words/description. 他震惊地说不出话。
5.My jaws dropped to the ground. 我惊得下巴掉在地上。
人物情绪描写之十：疑惑/迷茫
平庸版： He felt confused/puzzled.
进阶版：
1.With a confused look on his face, he was at a loss (what to do).
他露出困惑的表情，十分茫然（不知该干什么）。
2.He scratched his head, having no idea what to do.
他挠了挠头，不知道该做什么。