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读后续写:描写手部动作的50个好词好句,适合期末考前默写,讲故事

读后续写:描写手部动作的50个好词好句,适合期末考前默写,讲故事=Paint pictures with words

记叙文就是讲故事,借助于细节描写来塑造人物形象,编排故事情节(Paint pictures with words)。为了增加词汇的丰富性,我们在遣词造句时尽量做到“两个避免”:

第一,避免笼统抽象的词汇,尽量使用specific, definite, concrete language,这样才能创造出有血有肉、合情合理的round character(丰满立体的人物形象),而不是单调的flat character,这些扁平人物就是“路人甲”,他们的行为没能有效推动故事情节的发展;

第二,避免滥用的高频词汇,因为overused words容易给阅卷教师造成审美疲劳,一高兴就写jump with joy;一激动就hold sb tightly;一伤心就burst into tears,把读后续写写成了八股文,我们要想一想阅卷教师的感受,在短时间内要批阅大量千篇一律的文章,势必要视觉疲劳,甚至“语义饱和(Semantic Satiation)”

现行教材中的课文以议论文和说明文为主,没有收录适合记叙文或小说中细节描写的词汇,需要教师分期分批地补充这方面的高级词汇,下面就是描写手部动作的50个好词好句(获取答案讲解的方法见文末) 

第一、请填入适合语境的手部细节动作描写

语境1: The results would be announced the next minute. Dave was ______________ and prayed that he would pass the driving test this time.

语境2: Despite great efforts and determination, Dave failed to pass the driving test for a third time. he ______________  in frustration.

语境:3:Summer vacation was coming. Jack smiled broadly, ______________  together rapidly and exclaimed, “I can hardly wait!”

(获取答案讲解的方法见文末) 

第二、在故事中描述手的六个方法

(获取答案讲解的方法见文末)

第三、手部动作的50个好词好句

(获取答案讲解的方法见文末)

第1组 好词好句 优选(手部动作)

1. Jim _______a cake from the plate.

吉姆从盘子里抓了一块蛋糕。

2. ‘Please don't go, ’ he said, _______ her arm.

“请别走。”他紧紧抓住她的手臂说。

3. Mom ______________ and touched my cheek.

妈妈伸出手,摸了摸我的面颊。

4. I _______an orange from the tree.

我从树上摘了一个橙子。

5. The survivors _______ to a raft

紧紧抓住救生筏的幸存者

6. He _______himself onto a high stool.

他抬身坐上了一张高凳子。

7. His arms _______ as he walked.

他边走边摆着双臂。

8. She _______her chin thoughtfully.

她若有所思地抚摩着下巴。

9. The ball _______ over the goalie's head.

球从守门员头顶飞过。

10. I tried not to _______ the paper as I _______ it. 

我把纸打开的时候,尽量不把它撕破。

第2组 好词好句 优选(手部动作)

11. Mom would _______ me in, turn out the lights and _______ out. 

母亲会给我掖好被子,关上灯,然后蹑手蹑脚走出去。

12. They _______her from her bed.

他们把她从床上拽了起来。

13. She managed to _______ over the wall.

她好不容易翻过墙。

14. They all _______ for warmth around the fire.

他们都聚集在火堆周围。

15. She _______the dog on the head.

她轻轻地拍着狗的头。

16. Jack _______his arms around her waist.

他的双臂紧紧环抱她的腰。

17. He took off his wet clothes and _______ the water out.

他脱下湿衣服,拧干了水。

18. They _______a dead body out of the river.

他们从河里捞起了一具尸体。

19. His hands _______ blindly along the surface of the car.

他看不到任何东西,手沿着汽车表面胡乱摸寻。

20. She _______her hand along the rail.

她把手搭在栏杆上滑动着。

第3组 好词好句 优选(手部动作)

21. Danny picked up a broom, ready to _______ .

他捡起扫帚,准备攻击。

22. She _______her son _______ .

她热情地拥抱儿子。

23. She used a knife to _______ _______ the lid.

她用刀把盖子撬开了。

24. She ______________ the drawer.

她猛地拉开了抽屉。

25. She _______her fingers nervously through her hair.

她紧张地用手指摩挲着头发。

26. She ______________ his sleeve to get his attention.

她拽了拽他的袖子引起他的注意。

27. They _______glasses and drank to each other's health.

他们碰杯互祝身体健康。

28. They ______________ a sticky can of blue paint. 

他们撬开了一个黏糊糊的蓝色油漆桶。

29. The children _______ him with snowballs.

孩子们向他投掷雪球。

30. People were _______ , arguing and complaining.

人们推推搡搡,争吵着抱怨着。

第4组 好词好句 优选(手部动作)

31. He tried to gently _______ Jack away from George.

他想把杰克和乔治两个人轻轻地分开来。

32. He _______his way through the crowd.

他用手肘从人群中挤了过去。

33. I _______around in my bag for a pen.

我在包里到处翻找笔。

34. Marlette was already out of the door, _______ down a taxi. 

马利特已经出门了,正挥手招呼一辆出租车。

35. The men danced and the women _______ . 

男人们跳舞,女人们拍手。

36. He _______his fists in anger.

他愤怒地攥紧了拳头。

37. Impatiently,he _______ his fingers on the table.

他不耐烦地用手指嗒嗒地敲击桌子。

38. She checked the hall, then gave the others a _______ sign. 

她查看了一下大厅,然后冲其他人竖了一下大拇指。

39. He _______and _______ lazily.

他伸了伸懒腰,打了个哈欠。

40. He _______his _______ to the new employee.

他伸出手来与新雇员握手。

第5组 好词好句 优选(手部动作)

41. Dornberg_______ the table with the _______ of his hand. 

多恩伯格用手拍着桌子。

42. He _______out of the house, _______ the door behind him.

他怒气冲冲地从房子里出来,随手把门砰地关上。

43. She _______sugar _______ the strawberries.

她在草莓上撒了点糖。

44. He _______the map up and put it in his pocket.

他把地图折叠起来,放进了口袋。

45. Someone had _______ a brick _______ the window.

有人把一块砖扔进了窗户。

46. He _______a brick through the window.

他往窗户里扔了块砖。

47. He _______the aching muscles in her feet.

他给她按摩脚上疼痛的肌肉。

48. My sister's always _______ me and it really hurts.

我姐姐老拧我,好痛喔。

49. She managed to _______ the gun from his hand.

她设法从他手里夺过了枪。

50. Let's_______ a coin to see who will go first.

咱们掷硬币决定谁先去。