读后续写:描写手部动作的50个好词好句,适合期末考前默写,讲故事=Paint pictures with words
记叙文就是讲故事,借助于细节描写来塑造人物形象,编排故事情节(Paint pictures with words)。为了增加词汇的丰富性,我们在遣词造句时尽量做到“两个避免”:
第一,避免笼统抽象的词汇,尽量使用specific, definite, concrete language,这样才能创造出有血有肉、合情合理的round character(丰满立体的人物形象),而不是单调的flat character,这些扁平人物就是“路人甲”,他们的行为没能有效推动故事情节的发展;
第二,避免滥用的高频词汇,因为overused words容易给阅卷教师造成审美疲劳,一高兴就写jump with joy;一激动就hold sb tightly;一伤心就burst into tears,把读后续写写成了八股文,我们要想一想阅卷教师的感受,在短时间内要批阅大量千篇一律的文章,势必要视觉疲劳,甚至“语义饱和(Semantic Satiation)”
现行教材中的课文以议论文和说明文为主,没有收录适合记叙文或小说中细节描写的词汇,需要教师分期分批地补充这方面的高级词汇,下面就是描写手部动作的50个好词好句(获取答案讲解的方法见文末)
第一、请填入适合语境的手部细节动作描写
语境1: The results would be announced the next minute. Dave was ______________ and prayed that he would pass the driving test this time.
语境2: Despite great efforts and determination, Dave failed to pass the driving test for a third time. he ______________ in frustration.
语境:3:Summer vacation was coming. Jack smiled broadly, ______________ together rapidly and exclaimed, “I can hardly wait!”
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第二、在故事中描述手的六个方法
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第三、手部动作的50个好词好句
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第1组 好词好句 优选(手部动作)
1. Jim _______a cake from the plate.
吉姆从盘子里抓了一块蛋糕。
2. ‘Please don't go, ’ he said, _______ her arm.
“请别走。”他紧紧抓住她的手臂说。
3. Mom ______________ and touched my cheek.
妈妈伸出手,摸了摸我的面颊。
4. I _______an orange from the tree.
我从树上摘了一个橙子。
5. The survivors _______ to a raft
紧紧抓住救生筏的幸存者
6. He _______himself onto a high stool.
他抬身坐上了一张高凳子。
7. His arms _______ as he walked.
他边走边摆着双臂。
8. She _______her chin thoughtfully.
她若有所思地抚摩着下巴。
9. The ball _______ over the goalie's head.
球从守门员头顶飞过。
10. I tried not to _______ the paper as I _______ it.
我把纸打开的时候,尽量不把它撕破。
第2组 好词好句 优选(手部动作)
11. Mom would _______ me in, turn out the lights and _______ out.
母亲会给我掖好被子,关上灯,然后蹑手蹑脚走出去。
12. They _______her from her bed.
他们把她从床上拽了起来。
13. She managed to _______ over the wall.
她好不容易翻过墙。
14. They all _______ for warmth around the fire.
他们都聚集在火堆周围。
15. She _______the dog on the head.
她轻轻地拍着狗的头。
16. Jack _______his arms around her waist.
他的双臂紧紧环抱她的腰。
17. He took off his wet clothes and _______ the water out.
他脱下湿衣服,拧干了水。
18. They _______a dead body out of the river.
他们从河里捞起了一具尸体。
19. His hands _______ blindly along the surface of the car.
他看不到任何东西,手沿着汽车表面胡乱摸寻。
20. She _______her hand along the rail.
她把手搭在栏杆上滑动着。
第3组 好词好句 优选(手部动作)
21. Danny picked up a broom, ready to _______ .
他捡起扫帚,准备攻击。
22. She _______her son _______ .
她热情地拥抱儿子。
23. She used a knife to _______ _______ the lid.
她用刀把盖子撬开了。
24. She ______________ the drawer.
她猛地拉开了抽屉。
25. She _______her fingers nervously through her hair.
她紧张地用手指摩挲着头发。
26. She ______________ his sleeve to get his attention.
她拽了拽他的袖子引起他的注意。
27. They _______glasses and drank to each other's health.
他们碰杯互祝身体健康。
28. They ______________ a sticky can of blue paint.
他们撬开了一个黏糊糊的蓝色油漆桶。
29. The children _______ him with snowballs.
孩子们向他投掷雪球。
30. People were _______ , arguing and complaining.
人们推推搡搡,争吵着抱怨着。
第4组 好词好句 优选(手部动作)
31. He tried to gently _______ Jack away from George.
他想把杰克和乔治两个人轻轻地分开来。
32. He _______his way through the crowd.
他用手肘从人群中挤了过去。
33. I _______around in my bag for a pen.
我在包里到处翻找笔。
34. Marlette was already out of the door, _______ down a taxi.
马利特已经出门了,正挥手招呼一辆出租车。
35. The men danced and the women _______ .
男人们跳舞,女人们拍手。
36. He _______his fists in anger.
他愤怒地攥紧了拳头。
37. Impatiently,he _______ his fingers on the table.
他不耐烦地用手指嗒嗒地敲击桌子。
38. She checked the hall, then gave the others a _______ sign.
她查看了一下大厅,然后冲其他人竖了一下大拇指。
39. He _______and _______ lazily.
他伸了伸懒腰,打了个哈欠。
40. He _______his _______ to the new employee.
他伸出手来与新雇员握手。
第5组 好词好句 优选(手部动作)
41. Dornberg_______ the table with the _______ of his hand.
多恩伯格用手拍着桌子。
42. He _______out of the house, _______ the door behind him.
他怒气冲冲地从房子里出来,随手把门砰地关上。
43. She _______sugar _______ the strawberries.
她在草莓上撒了点糖。
44. He _______the map up and put it in his pocket.
他把地图折叠起来,放进了口袋。
45. Someone had _______ a brick _______ the window.
有人把一块砖扔进了窗户。
46. He _______a brick through the window.
他往窗户里扔了块砖。
47. He _______the aching muscles in her feet.
他给她按摩脚上疼痛的肌肉。
48. My sister's always _______ me and it really hurts.
我姐姐老拧我,好痛喔。
49. She managed to _______ the gun from his hand.
她设法从他手里夺过了枪。
50. Let's_______ a coin to see who will go first.
咱们掷硬币决定谁先去。