读后续写|如何描写失望/沮丧/悲伤的情绪
如果你要写遗憾，你就不能只写遗憾，要写命运拨弄的手，写世俗偏昧的隐晦， 写爽莽与逃避的交锋，写甜腻与苦涩的暧昧，写明知不可为而为之，写清醒的沉沦 写寥寥“不合适”。
读后续写又何尝不是如此？
如果你要写快乐，你就不能只写快乐。你要写阳光和清风，写天真烂漫的笑容，写草原里悠闲的牛羊，写青山与绿水，写夜晚淅淅沥沥的小雨，写屋里相拥看一场美好的电影，写一起散步嬉笑，写清澈的眼神，写一切你向往的画面。
四种情绪描写的方法
一、直接描写，即句中直接出现表示情绪的单词或短语。如: To his dismay, he failed to pass the test for a second time.
二、间接描写，即通过神情和肢体动作来体现人物的某种情绪。如：He slammed the door behind him before Mon could say a word.
三、比喻句，即对人物特征进行描绘，给人深刻的印象同时渲染氛围。
四、环境描写，即通过描写环境，侧面烘托出人物的情绪，有画面定格的感觉。
失望/沮丧/悲伤的情绪表达
直
接
表
达
(沮丧) adj: disappointed/frustrated/downcast/discouraged/ depressed/ disheartened/gloomy
n. Disappointment/ frustration/ depression/ despair/ gloom/dismay
(悲伤)adj: sad/ sorrowful/grieved n. sadness/sorrow/grief
Sb be overcome with bitter disappointment
A terrible pang of dismay clouded/enveloped/overwhelmed/seized sb
a flash of grief came upon/wash over sb.感到一阵悲伤
肢
体
动
作
sob / weep with one's face hidden in one’s hands掩面啜泣
Hide one’s face in one’s hands
Droop down/duck down/ hang down one’s head in deep sorrow
Choke with sobs
Murmur sth in choking voice
Wail with great grief 因悲痛嚎啕大哭
神
态
表
情
Sb be on the verge of/ be close to tears/ breaking down
one's eyes brimmed with sorrowful tears/ Tears blurred one’s vision/ Burst into bitter tears
One’s eyes were wet/ misty/moist/watery
Tears streamed/rolled/trickled down one’s cheeks
One’s heart sank/ sb was thrown into low spirits
修
辞
或句式
·Sb felt like all her/his insides have been drained out, feeling empty and despaired.
·Sb was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.
·A sadness had descended (笼罩) on him like a gray mist.
·Feel like floating on an ocean of sadness
·Gloom and depression clouded sb, like a black hole, swallowing sb up from the inside
·Sb felt a lump in one’s throat 如哽在喉/ one's throat tightened
·The sky is overcast, darkened with gloomy clouds, and the whole world seemed as if it were enveloped in a huge gray quilt.
·Sb felt as if/though his/her heart had been ripped open.
写作例句
将ABCD通过排列组合的方式，串成一个画面完整的语句。
① Overcome with bitter disappointment, she couldn't help weeping with her face buried in her hands.
② A terrible pang of grief enveloping her, she burst into bitter tears, feeling as if her heart had been ripped open.
③ The instant she set her eyes on sth, she felt a lump in her throat/ her throat tightened, sorrowful tears blurring her vision.
④ Informed of the bad news , she was seized by a burst of sadness and sank onto the chair, her eyes wet.