高中英语读后续写情绪描写万能句式与提分技巧
四. 内心独白（增强代入感）
万能句式：
万能句式：
1.What if [最坏情况]?" Sb thought, [his/her] mind racing.
“如果[最坏情况]怎么办？”某人想着，思绪纷飞
例句："What if they never forgive me?" Rose thought, her mind racing. The weight of her mistake pressed down on her like a heavy stone.“如果他们永远不原谅我怎么办？”罗斯想着，思绪纷飞。错误的沉重感像石头一样压在她心头。
2."This can’t be happening," sb muttered under [his/her] breath.
“这不可能发生，”某人低声喃喃道
3.Sb wondered whether [dilemma困境], torn between [option1] and [option2].
某人纠结于[选择1]和[选择2]之间，不知如何是好 。
例句：She wondered whether she should quit her stable job and pursue her dream, torn between the security of the present and the uncertainty of the future.
她不知道自己是否应该辞去稳定的工作去追逐梦想，在当下的安稳与未来的未知之间左右为难。
五、修辞手法（提升文采）
1．明喻
I feel as if I were floating in an ocean of sadness.
我感觉自己好像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。
She felt as if her heart had been ripped from her body.
她感觉自己的心好像从她的身体里被撕开了。
2．暗喻
Ifelt a lump in my throat，tears welling up in my eyes.
我如鲠在喉，泪水湿润了眼眶。
3．拟人
Fear seized/swallowed him.恐惧把他吞噬了。
Anger choked my words.我气得说不出话来。
A good idea suddenly struck me.我突然想到一个好主意。
4．夸张
My heart broke in about a million pieces.我的心成了碎片。
I almost laughed my head off.我都快笑死了。
When they told me the news，I was over the moon/on the top of the world.当他们告诉我这个消息时，我乐不可支。
It brought my heart into my mouth.它让我的心悬到了嗓子眼。
六、小技巧
1、根据情节选择合适句型——紧张时刻用“身体反应”，纠结时用“内心独白”。
2、避免重复——交替使用直接描写、比喻和动作暗示，让情绪描写更丰富。